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100 Word Challenge – Week #8

Hey!

For homework again, we have been asked to write a 100 word story using the prompt on the 100 word challenge website. (we have one every week)

The prompt for this week was:

…Grandparents are important because…

So, here is my 100 Word Story -

‘Welcome to… Random Questions with your host, Tim Dailey!’ I sat nervously, chewing my fingernails. ‘Hello everyone!’ said the host. ‘On Random Questions, we ask our two contestants Random Questions about Random Things. The most creatively random answer scores the contestant 10 points? Ready to begin? Okay!’ The host drew a yellow-ish paper out from an envelope. ‘The first question is, why are Grandparents important?’ I slammed my fist on my buzzer. ‘Grandparents are important because… they’re…family…’ My mind was suddenly filled with vivid memories of my Grandparents. When I returned to my senses, I was in a small room, sitting with my Grandparents.

I hope you liked it!

T&T

 

8 Comments

  1. Gerry says:

    This 100WC is really good. It makes want to read more. :) :) :)

    http://altony6.schoolblogs.org/

  2. Katia says:

    great story. Towards the end I found it a little bit confusing but overall a magnificant story :)
    This is the link to my blog. Feel free to check it out

    http://katiasas12.edublogs.org/2012/11/07/100-word-challange-why-grandparents-are-so-important/

  3. Michael says:

    I like your story, especially the start. Make sure you make your ending clearer though because I don’t really understand. Your blog’s background is cool :). My blog: http://michaelsas12.edublogs.org/

  4. Aamina N says:

    Dear Esha,
    Wow, I like your 100wc especially because out of all the 100 wc’s I have read…. Yours IS THE BEST! I love the idea of having it as a contest and a host to ask all of the questions. Next time try to use some connectives but other than that… WELL DONE :)

    From Aamina N at
    http://6d2012.highlawnprimary.net/

  5. Shikamaru says:

    Hi my name is Siddarath , you have a cool blog !!!!!!
    Here is a link to my blog siddarathpws.edublogs.org/
    Hope you visit my blog :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. sydney says:

    *I really like how you have used your 100 WC as a gameshow.
    *I like how you have ended the 100 WC.
    Next time I think you should have added a bit more description on you grandparents!

  7. dawso says:

    Hi Esha,
    That was a really creative way to write your story, I agree with Elisa! Although I do agree that the ending was a bit strange! Well done! That was really cool!
    Dawso

  8. Elsa says:

    I find it a good story, but the ending was a little hard to follow. Maybe check your punctuation, but a really creative way to write your story. Check my blog out at http://elsasas12.edublogs.org/2012/11/07/grandparents-are-important-because/

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