Hey everyone,
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Anyway, the prompt for the 100 Word Challenge of this week was:
…the car stopped suddenly…
Here is my 100 Word Story -
Bonnie Twill tied her hair into a ponytail. She stood up and checked herself out in the long mirror that ran down the length of the wall. She hurried out the front door and to the car, where her Mum was waiting. She got inside, only to find no one there. The car doors abruptly slammed shut, and the car drove away. Bonnie was being tossed and turned around, until the car stopped suddenly. The doors opened quickly, and Bonnie was tossed out of the car onto the cold, hard ground, surrounded by complete darkness in the middle of nowhere.
Hope you liked it! Please tell me what you thought of it.
T&T
Esha, this is a really interesting post and makes me want to find out more! You have used some great writing techniques, staring with an ordinary event and making it exciting. Your writing becomes more abrupt when Bonnie gets in the car so we know something exciting is about to happen.
Well done, some nice sentence structures in your writing! I wonder why the car suddenly stopped and tossed Bonnie out of the car – very dramatic!!
Hello Esha, your 100WC was absolutely amazing! You’re a very creative writer. Very exciting.
What a great story. I really enjoyed how the tone of the narrative changed so dramatically when Bonnie got in the car. I want to know more about how this mysterious event could have occurred, thanks for an enjoyable 100wc.