Hey everyone,
This week’s 100 Word Challenge’s prompt was a photo. This is the photo:
And, here is my 100 Word Story -
I skip happily along, into the forest for my next adventure. I can see birds in the brightest of colours and insects of many different sizes. I skip deeper into the lush, green forest, and find myself tangled in the midst of several branches and leaves that hang low off the trees. I skip even deeper into the forest. In front of me are two sets of stairs. I randomly decide to take the ones on the left. I climb up the stairs and hear disturbing screaming. I run back down and try the other stairs. They are even worse.
Hope you enjoyed it and please tell me what you thought of it!
T&T
Well done for writing such an interesting 100WC. Your use of descritpive language is superb and even without the picture I would have been able to imagine the scene you saw. This is an excellent opening to what could be a very adventorous story.
Keep up the excellent writing.
I really enjoyed reading this. You described it with excellent words and vocabulary.well Done!
I really enjoyed reading your story! I liked how it was always in the present and you used great vocabulary too. Keep up the good work.
Your 100 word challenge is very good because your ending makes the reader really want to read on.
i really liked your story!
and your descrption about the forest!
i really liked the ending i wasnt expecting it!
jasmine
from England
You have made the ending really suspicious because the reader is really desperate to read on!
This is very interesting. I like all the description and the mysterious horror at the end. Its’s intriguing.